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07 September 2009 @ 08:58 am
Speedpaint fail.  
I tried this new-fangled speedpainting thing out in OC1. Clearly, I need to practice.

Version #1:

Seems to have came out in a different style from what I usually use... I like the run-through-photoshop version better, though.

Version #2:

Heehee Burd. :B On a related note: Nightiiiime... DAYTIME!
Soul-blackening rage and: artisticartistic
Music: Spyro Dawn Of The Dragon Soundtrack - Burned Lands
fuestjuki on September 8th, 2009 01:33 am (UTC)
I love the second one. As for concrit--I don't do so well at birds myself, but I do think his wings should be a bit longer/more rounded towards the end. I love the way you rendered the feathers, and the legs are great OMFG so jealous of those damn legs. I love the eye, too! I can never get my feral eyes to look like that.
googolbugle on September 12th, 2009 06:59 pm (UTC)
Long-time lurker, first-time poster.
A bit too flat. Needs more shadows.

I did an edit to show you what I mean:

Excellent otherwise.

I hope you don't mind me redlining your picture. I'm better at showing than telling.
AngelbloodShinra: It's a MIRACLE!goggalicious on September 12th, 2009 08:16 pm (UTC)
Ahh, thank you! Redlines are indeed welcomed. :D (I should really work on my shading technique. That's not the first time I've been told my coloring is too flat. >_>;)

Also, I took one look at your icons and interests and GOOD LORD WHY ARE YOU NOT ON MY FLIST YET. *adds*